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Derwyn and the Mermaid

She makes him swim out into the deep part of the pool before she’ll touch him. She likes to play, the mermaid does. Derwyn’s never been a strong swimmer and she knows it. Making him come into the deep water gives her the edge. Means she can tease him, taunt him, swim rings around him. A flick of her tail is all that’s needed to put her out of his reach, to leave him grasping at nothing but water.

It’s surprisingly deep, the little wooded pool where the mermaid lives. She’s taken Derwyn down to the bottom of it before. Dragged him down while he held the biggest breath he could hold. She pinned him to the dark silt at the bed and sucked his cock while his lungs strained and his head spun… releasing him to splutter his way back to the surface only when Derwyn was sure he would either have to come or drown.

This time, however, she won’t let him touch her. She darts, fish-like through the water. Evades his clumsy human hands. Makes him feel slow and lumbering with each quick wriggle and kick of her tail.

“If you catch me,” she says, “you can fuck me. I’ll let you do that. In the shallows. You can take me into the shallows and fuck me with your big human prick.”

But Derwyn can’t catch her. He’s too slow in the water. He lunges and she’s gone already. She’s on the other side of the pool. She’s behind him, her slender arms wrapping around his chest and reaching down to graze (just graze) his cock. Rock hard. Throbbing despite the cold.

Derwyn wishes he was quick enough to lay a hand on her. Grab an ankle. Drag her back to the shallows and have what he wants from her. He remembers the silvery feel of her mouth on his cock. Her warm tongue. The breathless, underwater, almost-orgasm she gave him. He wants to know her cunt. But he can’t – not until he catches her.

Secretly, truthfully, the mermaid wants to be caught. How fine it would be to kick away from him, giggling at his slowness, and then feel a hand wrap tight around her arm. How exciting it would be to be pulled into the shallows. Further. Up onto the bank, where her gills would flex open, gasping for something that wasn’t there, where she would be the one who was powerless, slow, a plaything.

But she won’t just let him catch her. It’s a game they play, Derwyn and the mermaid. It’s one that she will lose, one day – she’s sure of that. It’s inevitable. He’s a better swimmer each and every time he comes to visit. So it’s inevitable that he will have her, one day. Inevitable. But that doesn’t mean the mermaid is willing to forfeit the game, the wait, the chase.

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27 Comments

    • Kristan X Kristan X

      The perfect combination. You’re in the exact centre of the venn diagram for this one!

  1. I love this blog post. The story is unlike anything else – the chase, the pool, and the mermaid. Erotic meets fiction/myth but makes me feel closer to reality! Don’t stop writing, you’re good at it.

    • Kristan X Kristan X

      Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes I feel like mythical stuff can capture reality almost better than realism. Odd, eh?

  2. Lovely! I have always wanted to write something erotic about mermaids. But I always got stuck with the thought of them not really having cunts because of the fish tail? I need to google this!

    • Kristan X Kristan X

      This is a thing. I love the idea of them having tails, but it precludes… certain acts. To get around that I always tend to imagine them as faintly green-skinned humans with gills and frills and so on. Might be interesting to write a full-on, tail-having mermaid story sometime though…

    • Kristan X Kristan X

      Thanks. I felt like getting the flow right was quite important for a story about water!

  3. […] The entire post is a tease — and not just for Derwyn. We get glimpses and flashes of what this sassy mermaid has planned. By the end I’m rooting for him, and I’m desperate to know more. Read it here. […]

    • Kristan X Kristan X

      No such thing as a well behaved mermaid. They’re mischievous by nature. Thanks for reading!

  4. I loved this! Like Deviant Succubus I have always felt stumped by the body mechanics of a mermaid – I loved your fairy tale so infused with longing and tease.

    • Kristan X Kristan X

      Thank you! Any relationship where one person dwells on land and one in water is fated to be full of longing, I’d say.

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